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Argumentative Essay that talks about the negative aspects of Digital citizenship based on the essay plan that I have previously written. However, the instructor left some comments which (There are quite a few problems here. The introduction is confusing. You do not mention the actual topic or offer a definition of what it means. You do not have a clear thesis statement. “On the one hand” is inappropriate for a formal essay and especially for an argumentative essay. You have repeated it many times. The paragraphs are rather vague and seem to rely on evidence from sources that are not academic. The reference list is quite well set out but nearly all the resources are inappropriate as they are not academic sources.) Moreover, please use one of the attached resources in addition to any outside source.